[scribus] Feedback and ideas needed

[John Culleton]

On Thursday 13 November 2008 10:55:27 am Mike Breiding wrote:
> Greetings,
> Here is chapter one:
> http://epicroadtrips.com/scribus/collect/
>
> I made the previously suggested changes.
> I added credits for referenced material and set up more styles for
> better control of indent, etc.
>
> I set up an FTP account to access the files. If anyone has the time
> to look it over, I would appreciate it.
>
> When I feel I am on the "write" track I will start on chapter 2.
> -Mike
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I downloaded the pdf NOV-13 and looked at it.
I spotted two typos on a quick glance. In the phrase "In 1896..." the 
I in In is bolded for some reason. If you mean to use a versal then a 
more distinctive one is needed.

In the text below the rusty GMC truck the word belogind has no 
meaning. Perhaps you meant "and belongings".

I didn't proofread further. 


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